Hey Dominique, Your blog post was pretty quick and simple. I like that you showed how to use icurio, and I liked your design choice.
There were a couple of grammar errors. Just a quick list: Slide three "one must chose which grade level they teacher, either elementary, middle or high school." *Choose, *teach, and the listing of the elementary, middle, and high school sounds incorrect. I believe it would be more effective to use a colon after teach. But I guess that is up to the writer. Slide three. "When this tab is chosen you can click..." There needs to be a comma after "chosen". This rule applies to every event where you begin your sentence with "when". There is another on slide 3 and one on slide 4.
I also found your slide show to be a bit short. I believe it should have included a "why to use it". I also think we were suppose to explain how we would specifically use it in the class room. However, the way it was worded in the directions made this unclear.
Overall it was good. But I think you rushed a little bit.
Hey Dominique,
ReplyDeleteYour blog post was pretty quick and simple. I like that you showed how to use icurio, and I liked your design choice.
There were a couple of grammar errors.
Just a quick list:
Slide three "one must chose which grade level they teacher, either elementary, middle or high school."
*Choose, *teach, and the listing of the elementary, middle, and high school sounds incorrect. I believe it would be more effective to use a colon after teach. But I guess that is up to the writer.
Slide three. "When this tab is chosen you can click..." There needs to be a comma after "chosen". This rule applies to every event where you begin your sentence with "when". There is another on slide 3 and one on slide 4.
I also found your slide show to be a bit short. I believe it should have included a "why to use it". I also think we were suppose to explain how we would specifically use it in the class room. However, the way it was worded in the directions made this unclear.
Overall it was good. But I think you rushed a little bit.
Regards,
Thomas